Drinking And Driving Speech

Can you help me correct the speech due tomorrow!
Good afternoon, fellow students and teachers, today I am here to talk about drunk driving and how no one should opt for any reason.
My opinion is that no person shall drive Wile impaired.
What is drunk driving? This means driving when your ability is impaired by alcohol or drugs.
How much alcohol is too much alcohol? It depends on your weight and size, but if this is your first time drinking, you can easily get carried away by the two or three glasses. Did you know that if you blood alcohol level reaches 08, you're drunk. Impaired driving seriously injures or kills many people across Canada, each year 259 million people are killed and around 22 minutes each person will die in a traffic accident related to alcohol. Although you probably think it could never happen to you, but experts say dose everyone has a chance of 40% of being in a crash involving alcohol in their lifetime. If you are stopped by a police officer and you have been drinking, they usually ask you to 1. straight-ahead 2. sing the ABCs backwards or 3. Take a breath test. How hard do you think it would be to complete these tasks properly if you have been drinking alcohol? If you are caught drink driving you face a prison sentence of six months to one year, or fines of $ 1,000 to $ 3,000, you can also get your license revoked for a period exceeding 10 years, would you prefer
spend time in prison, pay up to 3,000 a‚¬ and get your license revoked or get back home for a taxi, a sober friend, your mom or dad, or if you do not really have a means returned home a police officer will take home! There are many options that you can then choose drinking and driving!,
Have you ever tired of those glasses that make you look like the vision you have been drinking?
If you have an image that bears Wile those driving in a car! you could easily cause an accident.
Have you ever heard of MADD? that stands for workers with impaired driving mothers, it is actually a group on the Internet that moms have created because children were killed by a drunk driver. A mother who is part of MADD was a 15 year old girl who went out with four friends on Friday evening, before his daughter left the mother said: "Jamie I want you to be home before 12:00, Of course the girl agreed,
two of his friends were 17 and the other was 16, both 17 years drank larger quantities of alcohol,
and of course the mother waiting at home until 1:00 when she got a phone call telling her daughter disappeared because the car she was in lost control and crashed. One day, if any of you guys have children would you want that to happen to you? Well, I know I would not, I hope you make the right choice when you are old enough to drink and choose not to drink and drive, I thank you for your attention and I hope you've learned something new.

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